JOURNALISM
54 - SPRING 2002
ADVANCED
MAGAZINE WRITING
Spring
2002
Hours: T, Th 12:45 - 2:10 p.m.
122 Dempster Hall
Carol
Fletcher
Office Hours: M, W 9:00 - 11:00
Or by appointment
Office: 313 Dempster Hall
Phone: (516) 463-6464
Fax: (516) 625-3897
E-mail: Carol.t.fletcher@hofstra.edu
Congratulations!
You have just joined the staff of The Communicator, the monthly magazine
of the School of Communication. This semester you and your colleagues
will put out three issues of the magazine. This will involve writing,
soliciting, editing, photographing and laying out articles, as well as
soliciting advertising, arranging printing and distributing the publication.
In
earlier journalism courses, you learned how individual articles were structured.
Here, you will learn to structure an entire publication. You will begin
to consider such issues as editorial mission, mix and style. You will
evaluate how design and art interact with copy to deliver an overall message,
and how bias can be inadvertently introduced in the process. You will
have to grabble with questions about who you seek to serve, what you hope
to provide your audience, and how the choice of editorial matter, sources,
and advertisers may affect the overt and subtle messages delivered by
your publication. You will also gain a first-hand understanding of circulation
and production pressures, study how others have attempted to solve such
problems, and be encouraged to forge creative solutions yourself. Finally,
you will take part in long-range planning for the magazine.
This
is a huge job. Be forewarned that this course will require a great deal
of time and energy. Expect to invest no less than two hours of work outside
of class for every hour in class - and often much more. You will be expected
to adhere to professional standards, not only in your writing, but also
in your interactions with your colleagues. Work must be done on time,
meetings must be attended promptly and reliably, and articles must written
with a compulsive concern for accuracy. You will be expected to help one
another at every step along the way.
Please
note: Class time will be used for meeting with one another - for story
conferences, titling, brainstorming or general troubleshooting - NOT for
writing articles. All articles must be reported and written on your own
time.
If
you invest energy in this course, you will be rewarded with a wealth of
first-hand knowledge about the magazine business, the pride of having
made a significant ground-floor contribution to a growing publication,
and the clips you need to get an internship, freelancing work, and a job.
And, I hope, you will have fun along the way!
PREREQUISITES:
You should already have taken courses copy editing, intermediate journalism,
and feature writing and/or investigative reporting. You should be adept
at using the computer lab. It will be helpful if you have also taken a
course in desktop publishing. If you do not meet any of the prerequisites,
please see me on the first day of class.
RESPONSIBILITIES:
1)
Every student will write articles for the magazine. You will be responsible
for conceiving, reporting and writing one article for each issue. Addendum
A at the end of the syllabus explains what constitutes a completed article.
Most features are approximately 1500 words, but you should ask the editor
for a more accurate word count for your particular article. In addition
to writing each article, you must acquire one or more publishable photographs
for each page of your article. The photo department can help you obtain
these photos, but ultimately you are responsible. Your article will not
receive credit, or be published, unless you submit artwork on time.
If you want to work on a more ambitious article (for example, an investigative
piece), you may be
permitted to team up with another writer or take more than one issue to
complete your piece. Either
option, however, must be cleared in advance with the editor and faculty
advisor.
You are expected to come to each story conference with lots of fresh ideas.
If other staff members
have to feed you ideas for stories, your grade will suffer.
2)
Every student will also hold a staff position, for example, managing editor,
art director, or advertising
director. Addendum B explains the responsibilities associated with each
of these jobs. For the first
issue, I will assign these jobs, based on your input on the "Strengths
and Interests" questionnaire. Those who have already taken Feature
Writing and have experience working on or contributing to the magazine
will receive first consideration for senior editorial positions. After
the first issue, I will meet with all students to discuss their performance
to date and to learn about any problems they are experiencing with the
course or the magazine. At that time, any student who wishes to change
his or her staff position, or begin training for a senior editorial position,
should let me know.
Along with every staff position goes the responsibility of soliciting
ads and contributing to the
"Around the School" department. I will discuss this in detail
in class.
3)
There is a certain about of mindless grunt work associated with completing
each issue - for example,
running across town at the last minute to pick up a photo that never arrived
in the mail, proofing each
issue before it goes to press, picking up the issue at the printer, and
distributing it around campus. We
will try to divide up these thankless tasks evenly, and everyone is expected
to pitch in.
Pitching in also means helping one another succeed. Bring in clips that
will help your colleagues
improve their stories. Bring in clips for one another. Teach each other
about new search engines. Help
each other write gracefully. Learn to be constructive in your criticism.
Instead of complaining that a
story is too thin or too boring, suggest additional sources or an idea
for a brighter lead. The success of
the magazine - and your grade - will be determined not only by how well
you do your job, but by how
well you help others do theirs.
GRADING:
First
issue: 30% (15% article; 15% staff position)
Second
issue: 30% (15% article; 15% staff position)
Third
issue: 30% (15% article; 15% staff position)
Pitching
in: 10%
Please
note that the quality of the articles you write, while important, accounts
for less than half of your final grade. The remainder reflects how large
and thoughtful a contribution you made to the issue as a whole - copyediting,
layout, advertising, production, promotion and so on. To get a good grade
in this course, you must not only write terrific articles but also make
a substantial contribution to the magazine in other ways. This will be
time consuming.
ATTENDENCE:
Students
are permitted one unexcused absence during the semester. This CANNOT be
on a closing day. Any additional absences will result in the final grade
being lowered a full point.
Absences
are NOT an excuse for late articles.
Arriving
more than five minutes late to class, or leaving early, constitutes an
absence.
On
any magazine, there are days when you are busy and days when you are not.
There will be times when most of the staff is conferring over an article
that does not concern you, and you will feel you have little to do. This
does not mean you can leave class, or do work for another course. Find
a way to occupy your time constructively: look for story ideas for the
next issue, call a vendor to solicit advertising, ASK SOMEONE ELSE IF
SHE OR HE NEEDS HELP. If you leave the room, you can be sure that within
five minutes you will be needed - the copy desk will have a question about
your article or the photo editor will have a question about a caption
- and the issue will be held up because of your absence.
INITIATIVE:
This
is not a class where you will be told what to do. You are expected to
be self-motivated. If you need to solicit an ad, no one will tell you,
"Today you need to visit Dunkin Donuts and ask if they will take
out an ad." You will have to decide, on your own, who is potential
advertiser, check with the advertising director to make sure we haven't
already solicited the company, and then go out and do it. If your job
is to solicit freelancers, you should take it upon yourself to dream up
ways to do this (by making a pitch to advanced journalism classes, visiting
SPJ meetings, or posting fliers around campus) and then execute your plan.
If your job is to take photos for the issue, don't wait for someone to
tell you what photos are needed; call the writers, ask what their stories
are about and what photos they need, and set up the shoots.
I
am always available to help you, as are your fellow staff members. But
it's up to you to see that your job gets done and the magazine gets out.
If you don't know how to get started, ASK ME, PLEASE!
DEADLINES:
Late work negatively impacts the entire staff. Therefore the following
policy will apply. If you hand in an article one class late, it will be
docked a full grade. If you hand it in two classes late, it will receive
a failing grade and not be published. If you hand in two articles late,
you will be asked to leave the class. The same policy applies to late
photo submissions. NO EXCEPTIONS.
You
have taken enough journalism courses by now to know that stories fall
through, that sources forget to show up for scheduled interviews, and
that people who promise to put photographs in the mail often don't. None
of these are excuses for late work. Neither is a failed computer or printer,
or a problem in the lab. It is your responsibility to plan for these contingencies
by starting your work ahead of time.
An
article is on time only if it is on HU1 shared, in Word Perfect format,
by the start of class on the day it is due. It must include a head and
dek. It must contain at least 5 sources, including experts and the person
or people closest to the story. All sources must be identified completely
by name, affiliation, and location. The article must be well written and
complete. All statements of fact that are not a matter of public record
must be attributed. The story must be accompanied by a complete set of
usable photos with captions and credit lines written on the back. In short:
coming to class with a half-written story on a floppy disk does not constitute
meeting your deadline.
ACCURACY
AND ORIGINALITY:
Your
work carefully fact-checked. We will discuss fact-checking procedures
in class. A major error in accuracy will result in a failing grade on
the article.
If
you plagiarize or fabricate any part of any article, you will fail the
course.
All
articles should be accompanied by a list of sources and phone numbers.
You should keep your notes.
REWRITES:
After
you submit your article, the editor, copy editor and faculty advisor will
read it. You will then be asked to revise the article. You may be asked
to add sources, change the lead, re-organize the piece, or all of the
above. Even excellent articles by excellent writers require revisions.
Expect to be asked for revisions.
Expect,
as well, that the copy editor will make changes to your story. All good
copy editors do. Expect that your article will be cut, sometimes drastically.
Articles are almost always improved by cutting.
SOLICITING
ARTICLES:
You
are permitted to solicit an article rather than write it yourself. However,
you bear all the responsibility for the article's quality and accuracy.
If it comes in late, you will receive a failing grade. If it comes in
without photos, you will have to get them, by deadline, or receive a failing
grade. If it comes in poorly reported, you will either have to kick it
back to the writer for more sources - by deadline - or do the additional
reporting yourself.
As
an editor, you'll soon discover that not all writers are reliable. To
avoid getting burned, it is wise to write the article for the first issue
yourself; if you choose to solicit an article for the second or third
issue, give your freelancer a deadline way in advance of your deadline,
so there is plenty of time for rewrites.
KEEPING
IN TOUCH:
To
produce a month magazine, we need to be in contact with one another more
frequently than twice a week. Therefore, you are expected to check your
e-mail at least once a day, and respond promptly when your fellow classmates
contact you. I will check my e-mail at least twice a day; this is the
fastest way to reach me. Students should also feel free to call me at
the number listed above any day (including weekends) before 8 p.m.
We
have discovered, through past experience, that staff members who do not
use e-mail are not included in decision-making, miss out on important
meetings, and aren't available to help when last minute emergencies arise.
Therefore: No student is permitted to remain in the class or hold a staff
position on
The Communicator unless they use e-mail and check their messages regularly.
See me immediately with any problems.
SUPPLIES:
There
are no textbooks for this course.
However,
you need to purchase, during the first week of class:
1)
one IBM-formatted zip disk
2) three rolls of quality film if you own a camera; or three disposable
cameras if you do not.
(I will also teach you to use our digital camera.)
Additional
expenses will include the cost of developing your film and of phone reporting.
You
will need an AP Style Guide and are expected to read at least one reputable
newspaper each day. The New York Times and Newsday are available daily
in the box at the main entrance of Dempster. You should also read as many
magazines as possible over the course of the semester. Please deposit
your used magazines in the file cabinet in the back of the lab, as a resource
for our art department.
ABOUT
OUR LAB:
We
have a terrific lab but, like all technology, it sometimes breaks down.
Back up your articles and photos on disk and bring the disk to class each
day.
DISTINGUISHED
LECTURERS:
The
Journalism Department runs a distinguished speakers program that brings
two prominent professionals to the School of Communication each semester.
All journalism majors are required to attend these lectures, which take
place during Common Hour. The lectures this semester will be held on:
Wednesday,February 20, and Wednesday, April 17. Please mark your calendar.
Budget
We
have a 24 page publication. This includes the cover, inside cover (2nd
cover), inside back cover (3rd cover) and back cover (4th cover). The
four covers are not numbered; therefore, only 20 pages are numbered. The
first numbered page is the table of contents. Odd numbered pages are on
the right hand side. Our spread comes on pages 10-11.
A
manuscript page is about 250 words. A full page of print in our magazine
is 800 words. With photos and air, a full page of print is about 500 words;
big headlines may reduce this even further. It is still, however, better
to write long and expect your copy to be cut by the copyeditor. Writing
long does not mean padding the text with meaningless prose; it means doing
more reporting than you think you need.
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